Revision and development

Feedback on the radio show in regards to the first draft:

      • Add a jingle at the very beginning, before the song (a new jingle, not the same as the other jingles used throughout the show)
        Changes we made: using the longer version of the radio jingle first thing on the radio show, and a quicker jingle in between the shows

      • Insert the jingle in the dead air between the two songs
        Changes: made

      • Introduce the song/artist before or after the song(s) - make the radio show more conversational
        Changes: Rania has recorded an introduction and a comment after the song was played - to the first song by Arctic Monkeys, with a lively tone in order to make it more casual. Another improvising she has made would be an introduction to another song

      • A weather report on the final 3 minutes - make it conversational between 2-3 speakers
        Changes: it has been recorded, although it was just 1 speaker due to time restrictions

      • Include a quiet/no-lyrics song playing in the background throughout our discussion
        Changes: we have featured a calm/relaxing song played for the duration of our conversation

      • Too much time for songs and not enough speaking/conversation
        Changes: additional recordings regarding a forecast on the weather, and more introduction to the songs

      • Remove a song
        Changes: we have decided to keep all 3 songs, however, we included more conversations in between

      Link to the individual audio files:



      https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1m1P7YZJ7FuLABnJ7L_pJS_mfj2CO8nkg?usp=share_link 

      Feedback on the radio show in regards to the first draft:
      • Add a jingle at the very beginning, before the song (a new jingle, not the same as the other jingles used throughout the show)
        Changes we made: using the longer version of the radio jingle first thing on the radio show, and a quicker jingle in between the shows

      • Insert the jingle in the dead air between the two songs
        Changes: made

      • Introduce the song/artist before or after the song(s) - make the radio show more conversational
        Changes: Rania has recorded an introduction and a comment after the song was played - to the first song by Arctic Monkeys, with a lively tone in order to make it more casual. Another improvising she has made would be an introduction to another song

      • A weather report on the final 3 minutes - make it conversational between 2-3 speakers
        Changes: it has been recorded, although it was just 1 speaker due to time restrictions

      • Include a quiet/no-lyrics song playing in the background throughout our discussion
        Changes: we have featured a calm/relaxing song played for the duration of our conversation

      • Too much time for songs and not enough speaking/conversation
        Changes: additional recordings regarding a forecast on the weather, and more introduction to the songs

      • Remove a song
        Changes: we have decided to keep all 3 songs, however, we included more conversations in between


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