Revision and development
Feedback on the radio show in regards to the first draft:
- Add a jingle at the very beginning, before the song (a new jingle, not the same as the other jingles used throughout the show)
Changes we made: using the longer version of the radio jingle first thing on the radio show, and a quicker jingle in between the shows
- Insert the jingle in the dead air between the two songs
Changes: made
- Introduce the song/artist before or after the song(s) - make the radio show more conversational
Changes: Rania has recorded an introduction and a comment after the song was played - to the first song by Arctic Monkeys, with a lively tone in order to make it more casual. Another improvising she has made would be an introduction to another song
- A weather report on the final 3 minutes - make it conversational between 2-3 speakers
Changes: it has been recorded, although it was just 1 speaker due to time restrictions
- Include a quiet/no-lyrics song playing in the background throughout our discussion
Changes: we have featured a calm/relaxing song played for the duration of our conversation
- Too much time for songs and not enough speaking/conversation
Changes: additional recordings regarding a forecast on the weather, and more introduction to the songs
- Remove a song
Changes: we have decided to keep all 3 songs, however, we included more conversations in between
- Add a jingle at the very beginning, before the song (a new jingle, not the same as the other jingles used throughout the show)
Changes we made: using the longer version of the radio jingle first thing on the radio show, and a quicker jingle in between the shows - Insert the jingle in the dead air between the two songs
Changes: made - Introduce the song/artist before or after the song(s) - make the radio show more conversational
Changes: Rania has recorded an introduction and a comment after the song was played - to the first song by Arctic Monkeys, with a lively tone in order to make it more casual. Another improvising she has made would be an introduction to another song - A weather report on the final 3 minutes - make it conversational between 2-3 speakers
Changes: it has been recorded, although it was just 1 speaker due to time restrictions - Include a quiet/no-lyrics song playing in the background throughout our discussion
Changes: we have featured a calm/relaxing song played for the duration of our conversation - Too much time for songs and not enough speaking/conversation
Changes: additional recordings regarding a forecast on the weather, and more introduction to the songs - Remove a song
Changes: we have decided to keep all 3 songs, however, we included more conversations in between
Link to the individual audio files:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1m1P7YZJ7FuLABnJ7L_pJS_mfj2CO8nkg?usp=share_link
Feedback on the radio show in regards to the first draft:
- Add a jingle at the very beginning, before the song (a new jingle, not the same as the other jingles used throughout the show)
Changes we made: using the longer version of the radio jingle first thing on the radio show, and a quicker jingle in between the shows - Insert the jingle in the dead air between the two songs
Changes: made - Introduce the song/artist before or after the song(s) - make the radio show more conversational
Changes: Rania has recorded an introduction and a comment after the song was played - to the first song by Arctic Monkeys, with a lively tone in order to make it more casual. Another improvising she has made would be an introduction to another song - A weather report on the final 3 minutes - make it conversational between 2-3 speakers
Changes: it has been recorded, although it was just 1 speaker due to time restrictions - Include a quiet/no-lyrics song playing in the background throughout our discussion
Changes: we have featured a calm/relaxing song played for the duration of our conversation - Too much time for songs and not enough speaking/conversation
Changes: additional recordings regarding a forecast on the weather, and more introduction to the songs - Remove a song
Changes: we have decided to keep all 3 songs, however, we included more conversations in between
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